30 April 2018

Girls rock two at the zoo

this is my homework from the holidays. We had to do the autumn math and reading challenge.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Haylee, your sentence mostly tells us what the elephant was doing. It does describe the elephant a little, as a "baby". Can you find a sentence that describes the elephant a little more, or the girls maybe? Often there are descriptions of the setting in books too.
    Mrs Idle

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