Hi Haylee, your sentence mostly tells us what the elephant was doing. It does describe the elephant a little, as a "baby". Can you find a sentence that describes the elephant a little more, or the girls maybe? Often there are descriptions of the setting in books too. Mrs Idle
Hi Haylee, your sentence mostly tells us what the elephant was doing. It does describe the elephant a little, as a "baby". Can you find a sentence that describes the elephant a little more, or the girls maybe? Often there are descriptions of the setting in books too.
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