Ambling to the Hunting and Fishing Competition I spot slippery and slimy black eels wriggling in a bin of water on the ground. I ask the people that are weighing the eels if I can pick the black eel up to put it into the bin to be with the other eels for company. I have to put my hand over the eels mouth so it doesn’t bite me. As I pick an eel up it goes to bite me so I quickly put my hand over its mouth. Then I slowly put it in to the bin with the others and watch it slither around.They are really big and slippery. When I have enough looking at the deer I go back to the eels. There are more than before. I see a big big eel so I run away because it is so big. An hour later I see some people looking at the eels so I go over and show them my eel. To get a better look at the eel I pick it up. The people are scared and jump.
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Haylee, I think you've done a really great job of your descriptive writing. I can picture exactly how those visitors might've felt looking at you holding your eel, well done! I would've jumped as well, if I'd been in their shoes.
ReplyDeleteHi Haylee, you've included so much detail about the eels. It's clear from your description that you know a lot about eels - what they look like, feel like and how to handle them.
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