01 March 2017

Starting School

IALA recounts

I have worked hard to add detail to my ideas.

When I walked through the school gates I saw a playground and it was humongous. I saw a flying fox, it could slide across to the other side and it had a handle.

Then I went into the classroom. I saw lots of computers and one big computer.

The school had a pool with a deep end and a shallow end.

Then I went to the office. It had pictures of the kids.
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  1. Anonymous03 March, 2017 14:22

    Hi Haylee, You have worked hard to add detail to your writing. I like you described the depth of the swimming pool.

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  2. Anonymous03 March, 2017 14:25

    I like you ideas.

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  3. Anonymous03 March, 2017 14:29

    I like your ideas

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