06 June 2019

Bully Poem

In room 5 we have been El Grgoe came to school yesterday. The 
school loved him he teach us about anti bully so we did a anti bully poem.


My bully poem


Here at awahono school there was bullying
we want it to stop because younger kids
has been getting hurt and scared
from coming for school,

Always remember to be true.



 




 

7 comments:

  1. wow cool pick

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  2. wow thank-you Haylee for sharing about bullying I really enjoyed reading your post

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  3. nice work it was very cool :)

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  4. that was a really good I really enjoyed the bit when you said ( I want it to stop) and also I really like it when you said (Here at awahono school there was bullying we want it to stop because younger kids has been getting hurt and scared from coming for school) that is really just all of it but it is a really good piece of writing may be next time you could put in more stuff to convinces people to stop and show what they are doing to earth and may be show some cyber bullying.

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  5. I a Evannah from kokatahi school and I really enjoyed your writing

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